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can you make this sound good? -
5th July 2008, 02:12 PM
One day there was a clarinet named Franklin and he had a wish that all the other instruments could hear his music. He thought that he was the best instrument in the town, and his favourite type of music to play was rock and pop. He loved hearing the triangle play classical music, but most of the townsfolk preferred Franklin's music. One day Franklin the clarinet said "I want to play some music", so he went and did so. Some people in the town asked "what is going on, I can't hear the triangle. I think the clarinet is playing." Some of the other instruments liked Franklin's music, but some liked the triangle! There was a big argument in the town. "Clarinet!""Triangle!""Clarinet!""Triangle!"Th e people in the town did not like this. "I know!" said one of the people. "You can play at the same time!" The others thought it was a great idea, so Franklin and the triangle played music together and all the instruments and people in the town loved it!The end.Oh god, I must be desperate for points.No offence, but I've worked with kindergarten kids and first graders and they come up with better stories than this. The moral of the story is good though, I commend you for that.
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